A cavity in the gravity of our thoughts
Can take you to an other world.
You will reach at a point
Where nothing would be visible
Except a back hole
Remember
You are a part of this big universe
Rejuvenate
The power of yourself
Make yourself sun
A big ball of fire
Let yourself shine
And help the moon to shine too
Make the planets of thoughts
Revolve around you
But
Maintaining the distance
From youself
And
Under your control.
Milkyway is not only for them
It is for you too.
Via Daily prompt : cavity https://dailypost.wordpress.com/prompts/cavity/
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Thanks Jack for reading and appreciating ??
It was like a summary to spiritual thought … sorry I should have mentioned it earlier but I just put an smiley … but u replied even to that.. attitude ?? hats off…
A small gesture of appreciation by a reader means a lot to me. It am glad you liked it. Your interpretation to this absolutely right.
Thanks arora… keep posting
Wow. I love poetry of all kinds and this one …. I can really see the imagery and I love the description of our thoughts! Awesome!
Beautiful post!
Suffering Wanderlust
Nice poem!! Well written!!
What an amazing poem! You have such a talent! ?
Thank you life. You are such a lovely person ??
Your so sweet ?
What a lovely post! 🙂
Eloquent words. Beautifull penned. 🙂
Such a beautiful poem.
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I love how you took the prompt “cavity” and took it into this completely different direction! Space is always a great theme for poetry and writing. <3
love prompt based poetry!
Wonderful!
Really loved this! You have a talent!
Such lovely poetic words, enjoyed reading it
Beautiful poetry as always xx